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Connor
Joined: 27 Jun 2003 Total posts: 205 |
 Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 8:18 pm Post subject: Hound of Culann |
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tsm
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Total posts: 250 Location: California Gender: Male |
| Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:15 pm Post subject: |
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Cool stuff!
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| Skyelarke88 Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Total posts: 67 Location: Montreal, Canada Gender: Male |
| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:09 pm Post subject: |
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| Nice stuff - cool variety of genres on the last few posts - all done interestingly -
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dESCOLADA
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| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:52 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome stuff. Great storytelling and timing.
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Connor
Joined: 27 Jun 2003 Total posts: 205 |
| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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| thanks everyone, anything reading awkward?
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| TheAtomicTerrier Moderator
Joined: 04 May 2002 Total posts: 1658 Location: Florida Age: 32 Gender: Male |
| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:36 pm Post subject: |
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holy crow!
I love this sooooo much, I want more. Will this be in print?
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Connor
Joined: 27 Jun 2003 Total posts: 205 |
| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:12 pm Post subject: |
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| Probably not this specific one, but I may bee doing a short story with these same characters in an upcoming anthology.
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| Skyelarke88 Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Total posts: 67 Location: Montreal, Canada Gender: Male |
| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 9:21 pm Post subject: |
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| IMO panels 6,7,8 on page 2 don't read as good as the rest -
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woodchuck3d
Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Total posts: 664 Location: Florida Gender: Male |
| Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:22 pm Post subject: |
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I got a LITTLE hung up on panel 6 also. It took me a moment to figure out the which character it was and what pose he was in.. but looking back over the whole page it is now clear because you have have carried poses from earlier panels to help show the progress of the transformation. At first glance I couldn't tell he was pounding the ground. I thought someone was pounding on someone else's back maybe... or maybe the furry armbands looked too much like the muddy grass. I'm not sure exactly what had me confused.
Overall your storytelling is really good. Your characters are visually interesting and expressive. Your action panels are fun and energetic and your style is well developed and consistent.
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FearlessFosdick
Joined: 22 Feb 2003 Total posts: 590 Location: Vancouver, Canada Age: 32 Gender: Male |
| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:48 am Post subject: |
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This looks amazing! I love the bright colours and the flowing inks. Very cool.
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Connor
Joined: 27 Jun 2003 Total posts: 205 |
| Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 4:21 am Post subject: |
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| woodchuck: I agree, i was having trouble with that particular panel, and I don't think my solution was well-considered. It's difficult to portray that motion with limited space, but there's really no excuse. I'll see if I can fix it up.
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Dash
Joined: 22 Mar 2007 Total posts: 53 Gender: Male |
| Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 4:38 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome stuff!  BTW, are those three pages in the post named "Kid Stuff" over at your blog, also from the same project...?
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Connor
Joined: 27 Jun 2003 Total posts: 205 |
| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:01 am Post subject: |
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| yes, it is. It's all for a project at school. which bothers me because it's as if the whole thing is rhetorical
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Seth Wolfshorndl
Joined: 07 Apr 2006 Total posts: 211 Location: Joplin, Missouri Gender: Male |
| Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:05 am Post subject: |
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Your style is really unique. It's nice and flowing. Very nice!
-Seth
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| david p Joined: 01 May 2006 Total posts: 150 Location: bath/oxford Age: 23 Gender: Male |
| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 7:25 am Post subject: |
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| i demand more or this sort
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