I need help to go further on in this animation !

[ladokar]

I've spent ages in this, and that brought me frustration. I need feedback, somebody to tell me how to go further to guide me on out from my block, pleeeeeeeeeeez !

https://sites.google.com/site/ladokar/h ... -animation

thanks in advance
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[ladokar]

Here is the new version after working more on the shots...wish to have good critiques
https://sites.google.com/site/ladokar/h ... -animation

thanks in advance
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