Forward!

[bangalore_monkey]

Let me know what y'all think.

[emceeONE]

Not bad. Funny, really.

But the nose on that soldier in the foreground is distracting because everything else but that nose looks solidly constructive and in proper perspective.

Fix that and you've got a winner.

[bangalore_monkey]

Thanks!

I'm glad you caught that, sometimes i just slap a cartoony nose or something on and call it a day, not thinking about it realistically. I don't want to just get away with that sort of thing.

*Edited the original

[emceeONE]

much better!

I'd love to see your thumbnail for the original.

[bangalore_monkey]

Here ya go.

[emceeONE]

Whoops, I meant your original thumbnail sketch. Should have been more clear.

[bangalore_monkey]

this was the original sketch

[emceeONE]

Thanks. I think I like the composition better in the thumbnail. Feels less 'centered'. Did you do several or just the one?

[bangalore_monkey]

Yeah, i did a bunch. even considered doing the composition horizontally. plus all kinds of poses for the cat.

I've gotten a number of suggestions and will probably have a new one up tomorrow.

[bangalore_monkey]

Ok, here's the updated version.

[AntBena216]

WOW FANTASTIC