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ryokan

Postby laseraw » Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:25 pm

here are 8 pages i just finished for the 3rd part of a story published on an spanish anthology
no word balloons since they'd be in galician....
you can see the rest of the story here
let me know what you think!


ryokan no kettou part 3
story by duarte pati?o
art by xurxo g penalta

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Postby Hazzy » Fri Jul 09, 2010 3:21 pm

I like alot of things about this. But I especially like the texture- it's exactly how an ink drawing should feel.
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Postby laseraw » Sat Jul 10, 2010 12:40 am

thanks man!
i'm glad you like it!
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Re: ryokan

Postby laseraw » Wed Nov 02, 2011 3:36 am

this samurai adventure story, ryokan, is currently in preproduction to be a stand alone full book.
most of what's been published, if not all, will be reworked, both script and art to fit a broader arc and longer pace.
i'll try to keep people posted!

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Re: ryokan

Postby borz » Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:40 am

This looks really unique. I like the mood of the drawings. Great!

Greetings

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Re: ryokan

Postby Jiminator » Wed Nov 02, 2011 9:36 am

Great work! Love it!

Interesting characters and wonderful texture. I really like the drawings and the inking.

Well done!
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Re: ryokan

Postby laseraw » Wed Nov 02, 2011 10:02 am

borz wrote:This looks really unique. I like the mood of the drawings. Great!

Greetings

Borz


thanks borz!
you've got some amazing vistas over at your site!
dam, you got your perspective 101 down!
i'm crazy jealous!

Jiminator wrote:Great work! Love it!

Interesting characters and wonderful texture. I really like the drawings and the inking.

Well done!


thank you jiminator!
i see you're working on a story set on a similar environment!
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Re: ryokan

Postby borz » Fri Nov 04, 2011 7:33 am

Ah, c'mon! Thank you. But I'm jealous about your use of black and white. That's an issue I always have my problems.

Greetings

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Re: ryokan

Postby laseraw » Sat Nov 05, 2011 4:13 am

balancing black and white can be tricky stuff, but figuring out shadow projection is way harder for me.
i work intuitively a lot, specially sketching, so shadow/light projection as well as tight perspectives still get in my way ...
it gets better the more you do it, that's for sure... so i guess i'm just whining here
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Re: ryokan

Postby camino1961 » Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:43 am

Bro, these pages are beautiful.
You are definitely on your way.
I love your pacing and story telling.

Keep up the great work.

All the best,
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Re: ryokan

Postby Sunnfish » Sat Mar 02, 2013 10:36 am

I do not care about zombie stories at all - in fact I avoid them completely.
That said, I really like your style! The inking is tremendous, the action flows with excitment, and that last panel with all the creatures is just awesome.
I've heading over to your website right now to see more.
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