bell bottom girl

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bell bottom girl

Postby quickcope » Fri Oct 14, 2011 6:08 pm

I am still practicing on my girls..
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Re: bell bottom girl

Postby PEDROSCOPE » Wed Oct 19, 2011 8:13 pm

hey QuickCope,

It looks pretty good, keep on practicing...
I'd kinda like to see more of your initial sketch in the image.

Be mindful of your proportions, and anatomy her left nee feels a pretty small compared to the right..
Also, be careful with the lines under her eyes.. Too many lines on a girls face tends to make her appear older.
Your inclusion of clothing is actually doing a pretty good job of complementing her form. The belt buckle is flattening out her her mid drift a tad, and I'm a little confused by her hat.

I hope this feedback helps you. Learning from Critique and self evaluation is an important part of improving your and practicing your artistic talents. Keep on Sketching.
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