Nice artwork, I'm no specialist but the layout looks good with varied camera positions and framing.
I'd have to agree with above though, unless the panels are full of meaningfull text, the storytelling looks like "I'll show everything", ending up very slow. For instance page 3 werewolf leaving the house could use one less panel, although last panel is not necessary IMHO.
Readers are very capable of figuring out what's going on and what characters feel without having to show all of it. It's only my opinion. Just remember the pencils are very good