Dust - pages 1-7

[Dfbovey]

First block of pages from a book I'm working on:















Let me know what you think!

[Dfbovey]

Worked up a few more pages:

[FearlessFosdick]

Are some of the pages out of sequence? I only notice because your story telling is quite strong. If I'm reading it correctly, the page where we see long hair guy with the starfish on his head should come after the pages where he tries to escape. True?

[Hazart]

Looking great! I like how you captured the storm at sea.

[Dfbovey]

Are some of the pages out of sequence? I only notice because your story telling is quite strong. If I'm reading it correctly, the page where we see long hair guy with the starfish on his head should come after the pages where he tries to escape. True?

Nope, the pages are in order.

Sequence goes, one dude gets converted with a starfish, picks up a pole and ties to restriain his captain. Captain kicks and punches his way free and then swings nad dives into the stormy ocean to escape.

[JORZAC]

Very nicely done Df, I almost hate to think of where the thought balloons will go.

[FearlessFosdick]

well, nicely done then!