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Postby Loading » Mon May 10, 2010 1:47 pm

So nice, every panel is excellent
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Postby Tyler » Mon May 10, 2010 5:10 pm

Great pages. You strike a nice balance between dynamic camera angles and solid straightforward frames to keep the narrative consistently paced and easy to read. :idea: :)
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Postby mr cow » Tue May 11, 2010 8:08 am

thanks, loading!

tyler- i still want to work harder on my camera angles, but i'm glad the narrative reads well! one of my comic pet peeves is when the layouts are TOO dynamic that it makes the comic tough to follow. thanks so much!
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Postby senti » Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:07 am

Great comic! Nice pacing and compositions. Easy to read.
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Postby LordEzzat » Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:01 pm

Great book has great movement and flow with it, makes it easy to continue reading and enjoying...you also don't get lost or go...HUH what happed..very nicely done !!
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