Growing narrations

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Growing narrations

Postby Giovanni Simoncelli » Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:56 am

This is an experiment about the reaction between action,
its narration and the action produced by that narration...
Hope it's enough clear :)
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Postby gau dog » Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:56 am

It looks really nice. I can't say it's the most clear at first, but studying it, I get the gist of it. The actions and reactions are kind of over the top though. It's like the old guy hits her waist with his briefcase, and she mistakes? it as an up the cooch finger grope, the shady looking dude thinks he witnessed harassment with her crying when she just walks away pissed, then a crowd gathers thinking rape, then they become a big mob and overreact, then the mob gets even bigger (in a small suburb) and steam blows the old guy and wife out of his house. Really nicely drawn and pleasant color scheme.
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Postby Giovanni Simoncelli » Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:26 am

Exactly, perfect interpretation! I was a little
disappointed from a couple of interpretations
by some friends (that are not so used to read comics)
thank you very much James!
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