comic book pannel

[kmixgraphics]

Hi there! I am kinda new to this forum but i have seen that many of the experienced guys in the comic book industry are visiting and posting comments so i was thinking that someone more experienced could comment on this comic book panel....this is still work in progress and i would like some advice on storytelling especially,and paneling this is a first page of the comic book "the apprentice" that me and my friend (the story guy:) are trying to do for zuda comics competition... i would really appreciate any feedback since in this my little god forbidden country of Croatia (home o some great comic book artist like Esad Ribic and Igor Kordej) with only one comic book store( yeah only one) there is no professional help i can get with this...so please guys help me out tnx a lot...
you can see some of my other stuff at http://kmixgraphics.daportfolio.com/

[woodchuck3d]

Hi!

It's so huge that I gave up waiting for it to load.

If you could scale the image down to about 900 pixels wide You may get more feedback on it.

[kmixgraphics]

Hi!

It's so huge that I gave up waiting for it to load.

If you could scale the image down to about 900 pixels wide You may get more feedback on it.

tnx woodchuck, i did ! the smaller image is in my previous post...