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Sad story :)

Postby Giovanni Simoncelli » Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:42 am

Hi!
this is a story I conceived as a musical
piece, playing with a simple mechanic...
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Last edited by Giovanni Simoncelli on Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:23 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby Leandro » Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:07 am

(hahahaha) I love it!
The drawings looks amazing and the way you show his thoughts is just great!
Congrats!
:)
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Postby RodGuen » Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:07 am

:shock: :shock: i loooooove it. Fantastic style, draughmanship, and narration.
I'm a little surprised to see the entire first page for closure, where i think the first panel
only would work as a repeat to close the cycle.

Anyway, terrific job.

r.
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Postby Giovanni Simoncelli » Wed Jan 14, 2009 11:47 am

Thank you guys!
I had a problem, the first page was at the end for a mistake! :)
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Postby Koekjesdeeg » Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:58 pm

Enjoyed your comic. Stylistically it's very appealing and the situation is universally recognizable. Well done, hope to see more.
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Postby StudioBueno » Wed Jan 14, 2009 5:49 pm

Very nicely done!
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Postby RodGuen » Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:23 pm

8) i thought it HAD to be a mistake.

Terrific, Giovanni.

mi piace multo !

r.
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Postby warhole » Thu Jan 15, 2009 1:12 am

very good traditional illustration!
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Postby abbashanks » Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:14 am

hahaa! great WORK!
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Postby emceeONE » Thu Jan 15, 2009 5:25 pm

Hahaha. I think it's brilliant.
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Postby Giovanni Simoncelli » Fri Jan 16, 2009 3:37 am

Thank you again!!! :)
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