3 page story
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3 page story
by MaD-ArTs » Wed Nov 12, 2008 8:15 pm
here is some thumbnails for a 3 page story i am doing for class. lately been feeling kind of bad about my art work.. i know i have some hard time with story telling but i dont like my art lol i dont know if anyone can help me draw better but myself... any tip on anything please let me know i know these are the thumbnail but you may point out something i need to keep in mind ... thanks guys
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by david pentecost » Tue Nov 18, 2008 5:46 pm
I didn't understand what was going on in the pencils, but the inks seemed to clear it up a bit and seems very interesting. An assassin having second thoughts, I assume?
The window turning into a gaping mouth was actually well done in my opinion.
Keep it up.
The window turning into a gaping mouth was actually well done in my opinion.
Keep it up.
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