Dan Seven - nice pose!
I've started it over, essentially the same concept, but I think it's going much better with the alterations.
I have a question about the process of drawing digitally... or sort of a question, perhaps just a commentary... I find that with digital drawing, I need much more layers than I'd use normally, where, technically I don't use anything quite analog to a layer, except preliminary sketches in another sheet, to define better what to do and the composition (sometimes in the same sheet, if it's just for fun) and then I'd either transfer it to another sheet and finish it, or eventually finish in the same sheet, if it isn't too dirty to be "uninkable".
But in the computer I find that I get much more confused with a smaller amount of scribbles, whereas with real paper and pencils, even if it's a total mess of many subtle modifications, I can still make sense of it, not get lost in my own fuzziness of construction lines.
I wonder if eventually when we get used to drawing digitally it comes closer to the real thing, regarding this sort of thing... hopefully it does...