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Postby graphicfire » Fri Aug 17, 2007 10:37 am

I've been slowly teaching myself after effects and cam up with a few sample ads. Thought I would put them up for feedback to help find the areas i need to work on most. So any thoughts and feedback is always welcome.

http://graphicfire.inferno-orange.com/aftests.htm

http://graphicfire.inferno-orange.com/iotest.htm

thanks
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Nice

Postby Myndtwitch » Sat Aug 18, 2007 12:35 pm

The animation looked great!!
I want to learn After Effects... :roll:
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Postby 1peace » Sun Aug 19, 2007 5:59 pm

Impressive!
2 minor complaints
the middle one took off a little to fast to really read it well.

your studio intro is amazing!
uh I hesitate to mention- I don't want to offend- but you do know one of the modern connotations of the mythical animal you above illustration. just FYI.

anyway I think they look great.
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Postby graphicfire » Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:57 pm

Thanks for the feedback

Myndtwitch - Basic After Effects is fairly easy to get into, it has some similarities to Flash.

1peace - Thanks, I'm still working on tweaking the timing of them as well as a forth. Sorry I haven't a clue about any negative imagery i may be making. I'm familiar with the general representations such as...

Unicorn - courage; virtue and strength
Deer - pure, One who will not fight unless provoked; peace and harmony
Lion - Dauntless courage

Please enlighten me
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Postby HellboyOne » Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:50 pm

Looks pretty good! Some of the flying objects look a little squirrelly...especially in the first logo (not your title thing).
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Postby faroukbaaaaa » Mon Aug 20, 2007 4:54 pm

first one is my favourite, they both look good.

I had to laugh at 'signage' .. americans are funny
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