Character Jam - Mighty Mouse!
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RE: Character Jam - Mighty Mouse!
by Chuck467 » Thu Apr 06, 2006 2:29 pm
Here are some warm up sketches i did. Hope to continue onto a finished piece.
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You all keep the art comming...
by mannycartoon » Mon Apr 10, 2006 8:49 am
Comlock: Neat take...very cosmic hero looking with the fin on his head. I like his build and the flowing shapes he's made up of too. Reminds me of the Mr. Iincredible with the ponch and the shape of his head. I like the buttons holding his cape...very interesting design.
PEDROSCOPE: Simple, round...good use of shapes. I like the intese/silly expresstion on his face, the mouth esepcially. I dig the rough line work going ion. It feels animated (waiting for the clean-up artists
Bubbashelby: For the record I forgot the #1 plaque and your line is MUCH funnier! lol I dig the proportions and the buck teeth but he almost looks like a rabbit. I also think the way he's flying backwards is Very Bizzaro! You nailed it man.
jc_pawz: neat idea for a scene! I'm having 80's DM flash backs lol. Something I've noticed about MM though, if he;s got a neck he doesn't look like himself. Overall though I like the expressions.
dsoto25: Another scarry MM. I like the handleing of the ears and spit curl. I dig the symbol and the subtle way you go from yellow to orange. His expression is great as are the details like the boots. What does bug me a little is the white highlihts over your lines...they somewhat flat.
suryrony: Theodore from The Chipmunks as Mighty Mouse! I love the soft paint job on here. Your use of orange is nice there in the top. I also dig the details like the died up cape and the dish gloves. Very cute.
JulianFlynn: I like the grotesque muscles on this guy. While the colors aren't muddy they still seem to need separation. Some kind of linework needs o be there, without it the piece seems a little unfinished.
revtomfury: Now those are Shapes! Your use of elipes is very nice. It's ver inviting. He ooks really happy with himself. If I close my eyes I see him in a walk cycle. lol
MrImagination: I do very much like this last evolution. I like the acting that everyone is doing. I like that Aquamouse and fins. the classic costumes are also a nice touch. But I will say that with these last two additions that the composition gets a little muddy. But still a very fresh piece.
Chuck467: Rocking it classic. Very simple and stll very dynamic. You;ve got some good clean lines you're working with. Very solid animatable design. I like his stance on the top. MM looks mighty mad!
Moonman: Very voluminous! Good line work and expression of weight. He's meaty man!
His huge package is a little disturbing though.
Jarhead1: Now those are eyebrows! Like your clean construction and pose is very Ross. He's got a great intensity going on.
Wow...I can't belive you all are still posing! Kepp em comming. I'm glad to see all these "serious" cartooning taking to a silly charecter.
MC
PEDROSCOPE: Simple, round...good use of shapes. I like the intese/silly expresstion on his face, the mouth esepcially. I dig the rough line work going ion. It feels animated (waiting for the clean-up artists
Bubbashelby: For the record I forgot the #1 plaque and your line is MUCH funnier! lol I dig the proportions and the buck teeth but he almost looks like a rabbit. I also think the way he's flying backwards is Very Bizzaro! You nailed it man.
jc_pawz: neat idea for a scene! I'm having 80's DM flash backs lol. Something I've noticed about MM though, if he;s got a neck he doesn't look like himself. Overall though I like the expressions.
dsoto25: Another scarry MM. I like the handleing of the ears and spit curl. I dig the symbol and the subtle way you go from yellow to orange. His expression is great as are the details like the boots. What does bug me a little is the white highlihts over your lines...they somewhat flat.
suryrony: Theodore from The Chipmunks as Mighty Mouse! I love the soft paint job on here. Your use of orange is nice there in the top. I also dig the details like the died up cape and the dish gloves. Very cute.
JulianFlynn: I like the grotesque muscles on this guy. While the colors aren't muddy they still seem to need separation. Some kind of linework needs o be there, without it the piece seems a little unfinished.
revtomfury: Now those are Shapes! Your use of elipes is very nice. It's ver inviting. He ooks really happy with himself. If I close my eyes I see him in a walk cycle. lol
MrImagination: I do very much like this last evolution. I like the acting that everyone is doing. I like that Aquamouse and fins. the classic costumes are also a nice touch. But I will say that with these last two additions that the composition gets a little muddy. But still a very fresh piece.
Chuck467: Rocking it classic. Very simple and stll very dynamic. You;ve got some good clean lines you're working with. Very solid animatable design. I like his stance on the top. MM looks mighty mad!
Moonman: Very voluminous! Good line work and expression of weight. He's meaty man!
His huge package is a little disturbing though.
Jarhead1: Now those are eyebrows! Like your clean construction and pose is very Ross. He's got a great intensity going on.
Wow...I can't belive you all are still posing! Kepp em comming. I'm glad to see all these "serious" cartooning taking to a silly charecter.
MC
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Manny thanks
by dsoto25 » Wed Apr 12, 2006 5:07 am
Hey Manny,
Thanks for the feedback. It looks like this jam is still jamming away.
Chuck 467: The posese are pretty keen. The top pose looks like he's ready to role.
Moonman: The genitalia is pretty frightning yet.... I can't look away
Jarhead1: You're off on a great start man. Very cool pose and composition. Totally blown away by his expression man. Awesome
Thanks for the feedback. It looks like this jam is still jamming away.
Chuck 467: The posese are pretty keen. The top pose looks like he's ready to role.
Moonman: The genitalia is pretty frightning yet.... I can't look away
Jarhead1: You're off on a great start man. Very cool pose and composition. Totally blown away by his expression man. Awesome
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RE: Character Jam - Mighty Mouse!
by Chuck467 » Thu Apr 13, 2006 10:36 am
Well, got TWO of 'em done!! Having too much fun with this character!!! 
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by mannycartoon » Fri Apr 14, 2006 12:26 pm
Holy Nuggets!
Wow both are amazing Chuck467 but the coloring and the stars are blowing my mind! The Drama and depth is the second peiece are amazing...really complete. This could be peitch right now to CN without a second thought. The first one looks somewhat villanous lol. The bricks are great...it looks like the opening card for a permier episode!
Just my humble opinion.
MC
Wow both are amazing Chuck467 but the coloring and the stars are blowing my mind! The Drama and depth is the second peiece are amazing...really complete. This could be peitch right now to CN without a second thought. The first one looks somewhat villanous lol. The bricks are great...it looks like the opening card for a permier episode!
Just my humble opinion.
MC
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