December '05 Jam: Vida

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Postby youngatart » Thu Dec 22, 2005 7:28 am

Was gonna go with more straight forward coloring of this instead kinda did a monotone night scene more suited to the character.

that sums it up nicely mibodega
tyler - Through critique patience is a virtue . Nice straight forward drawing only crit is the eye spacing or something looks a bit off in the first one
brunodiaz.- Good drawing lots of appeal
BeLiAL - Cool coloring only small crit is I would tone done the colors on the picture behind her cause its competing for attention with her.
m_sketchbook - Nice charater design and expression I really can tell what she like without having met her.
visual myriad - Great hat trick hard to choose a favorite among the 3 the face on this one is stunning. Do you do these in painter?
nkdk - like the bolder ouline with the finer lines inside approach minor crit think that thigh should be longer
bishoplynx - Fun drawing dont know if I envey that snake or feel sorry for it .
Shmisten - Great design you distorted the hell out of it but it manages to still look like her .Well done.
blairsmith - Nice accurate drawing and the electric blue/purple really works .
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Postby nkdk » Thu Dec 22, 2005 11:28 am

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Postby bishoplynx » Thu Dec 22, 2005 1:58 pm

youngatart wrote:bishoplynx - Fun drawing dont know if I envey that snake or feel sorry for it .


Thanks. Yeah...me either.
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Postby Griz » Fri Dec 23, 2005 3:50 pm

nkdk, great work, but what is that thing with the shading?
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Postby rob.garr » Fri Dec 23, 2005 7:25 pm

I cant sleep, so I thought I'd sketch here instead :) 3:25 am ...

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VIDA!!!

Postby robH » Mon Dec 26, 2005 3:14 pm

here's my entry for December!
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Postby mibodega » Mon Dec 26, 2005 6:19 pm

Nice job, like the pallette, and the exagerrated arch of her back looks REAL good.

WOw, and the website is pure Candy (both the design and art). Not to difficult to see that you have mastered the color wheel. Even my girl came over and said, "see you should draw and color like that" I replied with, "yeah ok I will start now."
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Postby benjaminfaulkner » Tue Dec 27, 2005 1:49 am

1st jam for me, i wanted to colour it but ran out of time!
ive not picked up a pencil for years so im trying to get back into it.
comments or advice very welcome, thanks.

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not sure how to post with the black borders? :-(
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Postby mibodega » Tue Dec 27, 2005 6:10 am

benjaminfaulkner


Good Drawing all together. I see some very good line work and good proportions, not bad if you had not picked up a pencil for a while (not bad if you had either)

The only thing that bothers me a bit is her left eye, and the hair. The left eye seems to be opened as if she was startled or something while the right eye is not consistent with that. The hair just does not seem right. I think you can nail the lips a lil better with another effort based on how well you executed the rest of her body.

Again, very very good drawing in my opinion, keep drawing there is alot of talent there buddy.
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Postby Everarts » Tue Dec 27, 2005 11:30 am

robh: great coloring and shaping!!!
youngatart : Rrrrrrraaaaaauw miauw!!!!!

keep on going lads!
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Postby heri » Wed Dec 28, 2005 6:13 pm

robh, i'm saving yours!
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Postby benjaminfaulkner » Thu Dec 29, 2005 3:27 pm

Ok,second pose. Once again not enough time for colouring, i may come back to them depending on Januarys Jam.

Comments welcome.

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Postby Mike Thompson » Thu Dec 29, 2005 6:37 pm

RobH: Nice job...the fingers are a little stubby and thick, but otherwise a fine digital rendering!
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Postby Funksmaname » Fri Dec 30, 2005 8:50 am

:oops:
Hi All,
Been lurking here and seeing others amazing, inspiring work - and reading tips.
Here is my first up to the site, C&C welcome!

Hope you like it :wink:
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Postby youngatart » Fri Dec 30, 2005 12:35 pm

Thought I'd have another go at this same pose .Looks a bit like Vamperilla here ,I think..
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