Batman Storyboards

[A. Spinks]

Heres some Batman storyboards I did last year. They were for someones Batman short-film trailer. Dunno if there gonna be used now.

[Inadvertent Loner]

its neat, but a little too simplified in the layout of it. Where are the cuts? Are the last two panels a tracking shot? Or is it a jump cut? What scene is it? Its hard to read what's going on in the robbery. Also the city shot is very flattened. A different plain of perspective would work wonders. The boxes-as-buildings doesn't work here, even just a 2-point perspective on a *couple of those buildings would vastly improve the look of it. Just some suggestions.

[A. Spinks]

They were key shots that were gonna be together in a trailer mock-up for a a short film. I agree with all you say though. Thanks for taking a look

[A. Spinks]

They were key shots that were gonna be together in a trailer mock-up for a a short film. I agree with all you say though. Thanks for taking a look