Doc Ock and spidey...

[spideyman]

Okay been a while since I have done a seq. so I thought i would do one. This is page one, and if I have a nice enough response I will keep the story going.

Tell me what you think.

Thanks.

[ven]

I think you need to work on that explosion. Looks to me more like water breaking through the wall, than an explosion. Maybe that's because it's on the initial stages, I don't know...

And another thing, I really don't get the spatial relations on the final panel between the Doc and Spidey. Is Doc coming in or getting out out of the room, is Spidey on the floor or on the wall?!
I find it very confusing.

[doom_n_gloom]

I like the explosion/water effect. It has a refreshingly cartoon-y look to it.