"a life in comics" by teej

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"a life in comics" by teej

Postby Teej » Sun Oct 24, 2004 5:41 pm

short bio...done at the kubert school
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Postby TeagueT » Sun Oct 24, 2004 7:48 pm

Funny!...also well balanced contrast and great design on all the supporting cast.
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Postby Inadvertent Loner » Mon Oct 25, 2004 11:31 am

That is really great, I like your staging, and your designs are niiiice
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thanks

Postby Teej » Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:37 pm

Hey thanks guys! I enjoyed writing this one, it even made my teacher laugh at the chester brown joke. The character designs for all these guys came about just by constantly sketching them, and watching them slowly evolve... this year was the first time i really carried around a sketchbook a lot. It helped a great deal.
If you're interested, this page will be included in my new comic, for sale at>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> cafepress.com/edpuppet

thanks!-----teej
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Postby pantspresspapa » Tue Oct 26, 2004 10:37 pm

Wow, it's great to see someone who is so good at spotting blacks. It seems bizarre to say, but it's kind of a lost art nowadays, I think.
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wow

Postby Mikahl » Fri Oct 29, 2004 5:54 am

Yeah my priorities changed in high school too! Only difference is your drawing has managed to stay good :>

Composition is perfect. In my opinion you have mastered positive/negative space.

If your publishing this, I thought I might point out the sleeve on your instructor in the last panel isn't really hanging off his wrist. ITs kind of hovering in mid air.

But again that's the only thing I notice. I like it!
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wow

Postby Mikahl » Fri Oct 29, 2004 5:54 am

Yeah my priorities changed in high school too! Only difference is your drawing has managed to stay good :>

Composition is perfect. In my opinion you have mastered positive/negative space.

If your publishing this, I thought I might point out the sleeve on your instructor in the last panel isn't really hanging off his wrist. ITs kind of hovering in mid air.

But again that's the only thing I notice. I like it!
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Postby radsechrist » Fri Oct 29, 2004 1:26 pm

This is great. I would simplify the anatomy a little more, but that's just me. Black and white is hard to master. My hat goes off to you.
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Postby crazyjoe » Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:03 pm

lol i love it it looks great and has a funnt story
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Postby a delinquint » Tue Nov 09, 2004 8:26 am

haha, i like this a lot.
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-brad
the dope spot...
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