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[InkFarm]

value study here. im gunna be painting this so if anything catches your eye i'd love to know about it

[daanniejel]

Great sketch InkFarm. The only thing that caught my attention were the windows, the perspective looks a bit odd to me, but I would love to see the painting of this when you've finished it!

[iPenguin]

This is really nice, although the foreground lady looks odd to me... I don't know if it's her big head or little hand but something feels off... Maybe it's her neck? Or how she's cut off... I'm not sure, maybe it's all of those reasons... The rest is really nice though. It might work better if it was just the guy in the kitchen with the cat looking on...

Anyways, good stuff, I'd really like to see the painted version when you finish it!

-Pascal

[alteredcarbon]

I like this. It reminds me of the old black and white films. Hitchcock-ish. And I'm pretty sure thats a cupboard in the background, not a window. The perspective is good. Nice render.

[coconut]

I really like it. It does have a norman bates look to it.
when I saw it first I thought it reminded me of dutch type paintings I have seen.
The kitchen is a good subject for a drawing or painting.
In my house that is where the majority of socializing takes place.
The heads seem a little exagerated, but I like it alot.
The cupboard is fine.
It actually looks like a view from a child, or animal.
Like if someone was looking up at mom and dad in the kitchen.

[InkFarm]

daanniejel, iPenguin, alteredcarbon, coconut, thanks very much for the replies and comments,

im going to make several changes with the composition, and perspective involving the cabinet.

thanks again.

[InkFarm]

i posted the finished thingy here.
http://www.sketchbooksessions.com/thedr ... 251#311251

[coconut]

I don't see it!?