cain and the abyss

[suryrony]

my movie
enjoy
http://www.musrara.co.il/vid/roni.ram

[cedricstudio]

Wow, this is really different. On the plus side, I really liked the black and white mutli-panel segments. That was a very creative approach that you don't usually see in animation. On the minus side, the ending confused me. I was with you up until he landed at the bottom of the canyon. Also, the pacing was a little slow but maybe that was just me. Some b/g music might really help.

Overall not bad at all, and definitely original. Was this a student piece or something you did on your own?

[suryrony]

yeah someone just uploaded it to the net so i posted the address
it's been a couple of years since i finished it - it was a student piece.
i have no idea what version they uploaded to the net cause i don't use realplayer.

but basiclly he goes down the abyss and gets confused u might say between the woman image and a a monster (or menace) image so he reacts violently and kills her and then gets stuck on the bottom in an even worse condition than before and still lonely.
i choose to put only background noises like wind and footsteps \coughing\door sckreetches. cause music would only downsize the story