FF, THOR, SILVER SURFER and some other jerk

[ShlockBMovieWriter]

a quickie. And not even my favorite kind.


--- Censored for your benefit ---

[ShlockBMovieWriter]

Possibly what knocked him out of the sky?

[Kazukisan]

Yep, that'll do it.

I'm not quite drawn to the Silver Surfer sketch. The proportions are off, and he seems way to big in the upper body. But the second sketch is great. It screams action!<applause>

[ShlockBMovieWriter]

Thanks Kazu. Yeah, the silver surfer obviously evolved, in different parts to what it is now. I'm gonna fix that wonky leg. Pencils give me the line thickness that I havent mastered yet with pen. The downfall is, you can only erase so many times.

and I have problems seeing blue pencils cause Im color blind. heh.


-Dave

[ShlockBMovieWriter]

I moved the hammer, just didnt wanna fiddle with it anymore, I know it has tangents and what not, and the right horn on Lokis head is off. and thors left shoulder needs more volume.

<our left/right>


Thor Victorious.

[The Cure]

cool stuff! I like the thor sketch in particular.

-Robert

[ShlockBMovieWriter]

Thanks cure. I appreciate all the responses guys. I'll see if I can think of anything else I'd like to do.

-Dave

[da peacekeeper]

Yo Shlock, I dig that FF pic. Good choice of perspective. Although it is a little off. The shoulder. I would also like to see the hand little more like it was trying to GRASP the Thing. A little more dynamic. Hope that helped.

[j.scott]

Um, what did you censor? Probably a Silver Surfer money shot on Invisible Girl or something or something like that...

I like the idea behind the FF/Galactus shot...Reed is a bit lost in the layout though and things might be alittle too lined up in the comp, but good idea nonetheless..

[ShlockBMovieWriter]

lol. The mind will wander. You'll never KNOW what WAS in the original Silver Surfer Sketch. Muahahaha!

[ShlockBMovieWriter]

my own.