Just to use more this thread, I group all my production of the moment. It's better, I think. Here, it's just a searching of various characters for a story of a young boy called Ali.
I like both images but the second one is so much stronger with the black outlines. It's much clearer where the focus is. On the first image my eyes just sort of see masses of colour at first and it takes a while to focus and figure what what I'm looking at.