ryokan

[laseraw]

here are 8 pages i just finished for the 3rd part of a story published on an spanish anthology
no word balloons since they'd be in galician....
you can see the rest of the story here
let me know what you think!


ryokan no kettou part 3
story by duarte pati?o
art by xurxo g penalta

[Hazzy]

I like alot of things about this. But I especially like the texture- it's exactly how an ink drawing should feel.

[laseraw]

thanks man!
i'm glad you like it!

[laseraw]

this samurai adventure story, ryokan, is currently in preproduction to be a stand alone full book.
most of what's been published, if not all, will be reworked, both script and art to fit a broader arc and longer pace.
i'll try to keep people posted!

[borz]

This looks really unique. I like the mood of the drawings. Great!

Greetings

Borz

[Jiminator]

Great work! Love it!

Interesting characters and wonderful texture. I really like the drawings and the inking.

Well done!

[laseraw]

This looks really unique. I like the mood of the drawings. Great!

Greetings

Borz

thanks borz!
you've got some amazing vistas over at your site!
dam, you got your perspective 101 down!
i'm crazy jealous!

Great work! Love it!

Interesting characters and wonderful texture. I really like the drawings and the inking.

Well done!

thank you jiminator!
i see you're working on a story set on a similar environment!

[borz]

Ah, c'mon! Thank you. But I'm jealous about your use of black and white. That's an issue I always have my problems.

Greetings

Borz

[laseraw]

balancing black and white can be tricky stuff, but figuring out shadow projection is way harder for me.
i work intuitively a lot, specially sketching, so shadow/light projection as well as tight perspectives still get in my way ...
it gets better the more you do it, that's for sure... so i guess i'm just whining here

[camino1961]

Bro, these pages are beautiful.
You are definitely on your way.
I love your pacing and story telling.

Keep up the great work.

All the best,
camino1961
"Rolling solo-deep"
http://www.camino1961.com

[Sunnfish]

I do not care about zombie stories at all - in fact I avoid them completely.
That said, I really like your style! The inking is tremendous, the action flows with excitment, and that last panel with all the creatures is just awesome.
I've heading over to your website right now to see more.