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Work in progress!

Postby borz » Thu Jun 08, 2006 4:17 am

First of all I want to apologize for my english (I'm from Basel, Switzerland)

This ist my first threat, so I want to share my latest work with you. The first thing is an adaption of a very old german tale from Wilhelm Hauff. I loved it as a child and now I want to do a comic-version of it. Here's the first page:

http://static.flickr.com/65/162945004_61a6f96785_b.jpg

The second things are drawings I've done for a childrens novel I wrote. I'm working on the wepsite and these are going to be seen as the Background:

http://static.flickr.com/44/148138712_aa4888804b_o.jpg

The others aren't finished yet:

http://static.flickr.com/48/138278783_e27aca487f_o.jpg

http://static.flickr.com/55/139001826_c173742a27_o.jpg

http://static.flickr.com/49/140854642_9d9ea0bf3b_o.jpg

Tell me what you think, please! If you interested in other works of me you can take a look at my website http://www.boriszatko.com.

Greatings

Borz
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Postby lupin3 » Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:33 am

Looks great 8)
I really like your lines and very good colors
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Postby Nofret » Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:48 am

Welcome aboard!

Some very lovely work there! The first page is great: solid drawings, nice colours and a fun style. Your pencils sketch research of backgrounds also look great. Good stuff! I'll be visiting your website later on for sure :)
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Postby herval » Thu Jun 08, 2006 6:27 am

:shock:
Welcome!
Awesome work!
Nice style, wonderful backgrounds and gorgeous colors.
I've instantaneously bookmarked your website!
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Postby borz » Thu Jun 08, 2006 6:53 am

Thanks! That means a lot to me :-). I have visited this Board for a long time and always admired the works here! So, to get compliments from you guys ist great! It's a great spur!
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Postby TheRonin » Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:37 pm

WOW, that's quite a business card you showed to us :D
Welcome aboard! Love the details and the atmosphere of your pages: I have just one
critic: you should link directly the images in the post or use the attachment feature here:
it's about sharing art on this forums (as you know) and having a link is not quite the same ;)

Hope to see more,
Francesco
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Postby borz » Fri Jun 09, 2006 1:11 am

Thanks for that great compliment!!! Yeah I wanted to post the pictures directly or something like that. But it didn't worked, and I don't know why. That's this "Add an attachement", isn't it? BUt when I try that, I receive this message: "The Extension '' was deactivated by an board admin, therefore this Attachment is not displayed." Why is that so? Can you help me? Is that this img-code or something? You see I'm really stupit in things like that.

:cry:
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Postby borz » Fri Jun 09, 2006 1:12 am

????

It worked!!! I dont' know why, but it worked! Okay! Great! Whee-Ha! :D
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Postby Mystic 7 » Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:10 am

You are very good. This is the first post in a long time that I've really enjoyed. I look forward to seeing more.

Peace,
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Postby borz » Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:34 am

Thank you! That was really nice :D

Beside from the Adaption, that I just started to do and the novel that is allready finished I want to push an other project of mine. It will be a musicvideo and I will start storyboarding soon. I will post some of it here to get some usefull feedback. This picture was an early layout test:
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Postby Laiz » Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:47 am

Cool pics, I specially like the last one with the unborn baby monkey? A small crit, I'm not a fan of the typographies you selected... but the draw is amazing, welcome to the board.... :D
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Postby borz » Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:53 am

Thanks and ... you touched a nerv! :? typography is a little bit my Achilles tendon ... It's a thing I slowly getting right.

Greatings

Borz
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Postby arun6004 » Fri Jun 09, 2006 5:07 am

Saw the pics on flickr, and for some reason it remined me of the Asterix comics... You've got a very pleasing style... please post more!
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Postby Obi Wan Shinobi » Fri Jun 09, 2006 6:04 am

Your backgrounds are so wonderful! I really like your comic style.
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Postby themonkeyking » Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:00 am

Amazing and fun!
Welcome! :D
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