Nice efforts in general guys!
Moody drawing pixelbear!
EbOla I be inclined to agree with you, and if you showed it to anyone outside of this Jam, people wouldn't necessarily have an understanding of why a pinky would be drawn like that. Here though, everyone knows why, because they are working from the same reference, and I personally get to take on the challenge of trying to effectively convey that difficult hand configuration.
I confess, that's one of the things that attracted me to drawing it.
As to crits... on the squatting with the platform shoes pose -the rib lines are indicated too severely-you can take out most of the line work you have there. They are much softer, lighter in value, and don't extend down the entire length of the ribcage. Also, I see only 3 rib lines indicated in the photo reference
Think of another way of doing the eyes. They are almost slits in the reference, and you can see her irises. They are not as round and black as you are describing them. You need a much sharper pointed pencil than what you're using to get in there. If you like the look of a thick line, you can go in with a fine line around details, and then beef them up in key spots so they match the overall line quality.
And I don't think you need a wall shadow -just the one on the bottom to ground the figure.