I like the minimal coloring treatment, but I'm wondering if a splash of red behind her would work better than the red outline.
Very nice. I really dig the texture you put on the chair.
Ah, the paperless promises of the Cintiq. Looking forward to seeing the finished version of this.
Great 1st entry! Since you asked for C&C, I think the thing that most stood out was her hair; it's a bit spaghetti like. Perhaps building up the form of it a bit more and hinting at the strands instead of focusing on individual ones would help.
Ah, that's sweet
Another great painting. Love how it just kind of drifts off around the edges
Great use of contrast.
And I really like the looseness of the brush strokes and slight exaggeration in the second piece
I really like that, sketchy and polished at the same time
The energy of the background really meshes well with the dynamic of the figure. Cool how the detail drifts off as you move away from her face.
Very nice, you really captured the sheen she had in the photo well.
And now my humble contribution. Thought I'd mess around with one of them as a loose ink warm up earlier today.