first a few comments:
walrus: i always liked your style as long as i sneak around this forum. so yours is one of my favourites.
LadyAibrean: it's a cool idea to put the references into that kind of neon lights. I'd love to see them mounted on a real bar!
chad coyle: really like the looseness of your work. it's really cute and sexy and as you wrote the speed of your piece gives a nice feel to it - kind of retro i think.
BeLial: thats a cool and clean piece with a real fresh feel to it - and I like her looking the side.from my piont of view, her breasts seem a bit to similar - but it's a nice piece anyway.
mikestyle: yours is my favourite one. the pose is damn hard to draw and I can't really find any weaknesses in your attempt. I like the uncolored version more - can't give you any real reasons for that - maybe the purple hair or the background in the colored one.
artscreen: why don't you go on with it? i love the high contrasts in the coloring and the whole design of what's already there...
I had a try on the first pose but it really drove me mad - so I decided to work on one of the easier ones. I might find the time to clean it up or pencil it again to do a colored version. I really like that pose. thanks for the nice references!