The Small Press Virgin

Page 4 finally got started!!!

So, today I laid out (fullsize, I might add!) pages 4 and 5 in rough. I've gone in and finished 3 and 2 half panels on those pages and now, it's time for a little potty break.

Below is the first panel on page 4.

I think that when it comes to inking I'll omit the fence in the foreground. It seems to draw my eye away from the crashsite. (perhaps I'll re-draw it bisecting the furrow dug by the crash instead of parallel to it, what do you think?)

I've alos just noticed that I haven't varied any line-weights at all. That'll have to get fixed in the inks.

Anyway - - the comic's back on the tracks for now. Look out for more updates soon!!!

-Rob